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marycatelli ([personal profile] marycatelli) wrote2023-10-27 11:36 pm

the fight

So there's a fight.  It's to establish the complications of the world, that there are other foes than the original ones.  To help conceal the hero, actually.

But when I hit it, I think the secondary hero could deal with it too easily.  Not that it's meant to be difficult, but if he's too competent -- 

I think about tactics a bit. Especially because the foe is necessarily stupid.