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marycatelli) wrote2024-07-15 11:51 pm
marycatelli) wrote2024-07-15 11:51 pm
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I thought the scene where the heroine put down her foot about something to try to protect her would be the midpoint. Except it's not shaping up that way. In part because I introduced another scene which may confuse the matter.
sigh You know, it was one of the first scenes I thought of when I realized the story was too thin.
sigh You know, it was one of the first scenes I thought of when I realized the story was too thin.