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marycatelli) wrote2025-03-06 10:26 pm
marycatelli) wrote2025-03-06 10:26 pm
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muddling through the draft
Was plugging along on the first draft, and realized that it might be more interesting with another character, the daughter of one I had in the outline. Breezily wrote pages with her --
And realized that she doesn't work. The hero has to be opposed by someone whose expectation is unreasonable, and so the daughter has to go.
I glowered and grumbled, and poked it to figure out where to set up the no-longer-a-mother do what was needed. I realized that after what happened to the hero's mother, I could set up a kind-and-unkind-girls tale.
Which relief lasted until I sat down and had to write it. I still needed to plot out three scenes and put them in.
Ah, well, at least the vague outlines have formed.
And realized that she doesn't work. The hero has to be opposed by someone whose expectation is unreasonable, and so the daughter has to go.
I glowered and grumbled, and poked it to figure out where to set up the no-longer-a-mother do what was needed. I realized that after what happened to the hero's mother, I could set up a kind-and-unkind-girls tale.
Which relief lasted until I sat down and had to write it. I still needed to plot out three scenes and put them in.
Ah, well, at least the vague outlines have formed.