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marycatelli ([personal profile] marycatelli) wrote2025-05-30 11:09 pm

this will be important later

Introduce him, introduce her, show off that -- 

She's too important a character to just fade into the woodwork.  Even if she is shy, the heroine will be determined that she has a good time at the school.  

And the other villain of the piece should make an appearance too, even if he can be downplayed later.

Foreshadowing, I suppose.  And there should be some day-to-day school stuff between the highlights

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