http://Editorial Vita Brevis/ ([identity profile] editorial vita brevis) wrote in [personal profile] marycatelli 2016-09-09 06:43 pm (UTC)

More professional

The second one looks a lot more professional (though it would probably need a little breathing space on the left, so that the letter aren't so close to the edge, and a little less spacing between lines; those two simple changes would improve it greatly).

I love the little imps on the first, but the cover as a whole screams non-professionally-made to me and might cause some potential buyers who don't know your books to steer clear of your work.

Bruno

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