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marycatelli) wrote2021-02-28 11:58 pm
marycatelli) wrote2021-02-28 11:58 pm
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so that's the problem
figuring out the weakness of the opening: it's two scenes, and the first is mostly info-dumping.
It should start in the forest, talking about firebirds and golden stags and info-dumping there, because it's not much information, actually.
So all I have to do is dump four pages and rewrite. Which is trivial. I've done much more.
sigh So I'm still bracing myself for it. The writing life.
It should start in the forest, talking about firebirds and golden stags and info-dumping there, because it's not much information, actually.
So all I have to do is dump four pages and rewrite. Which is trivial. I've done much more.
sigh So I'm still bracing myself for it. The writing life.