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marycatelli) wrote2022-11-18 11:03 pm
marycatelli) wrote2022-11-18 11:03 pm
a fight breaks out
I know what happens in it. I even have a point of view character whose job in the fight will ensure he gets a good view of what happens.
It's getting it to break out that's hard.
Added some more motive for our hero to join in, since a fair number will fight because they took on the job, but he's free, and has to take her danger personally, or else hate her personally. I went for hate, with danger as a subtheme.
Immediate precipitant is finishing their preparations. I think they will discover she realized they were coming since they took some time to prepare.
It's getting it to break out that's hard.
Added some more motive for our hero to join in, since a fair number will fight because they took on the job, but he's free, and has to take her danger personally, or else hate her personally. I went for hate, with danger as a subtheme.
Immediate precipitant is finishing their preparations. I think they will discover she realized they were coming since they took some time to prepare.