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marycatelli) wrote2022-11-20 11:01 pm
marycatelli) wrote2022-11-20 11:01 pm
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a tale of two villains
If you have two villains, one has to be dealt with first -- and be less important -- or they have to be induced to attack each other by the hero, or they have to join forces.
Otherwise the conflict gets muddy.
Which means that the two rivalries in this story have to merge somehow, since neither the brother nor the princess is going to be minor. sigh
Otherwise the conflict gets muddy.
Which means that the two rivalries in this story have to merge somehow, since neither the brother nor the princess is going to be minor. sigh