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marycatelli) wrote2024-09-03 07:53 pm
marycatelli) wrote2024-09-03 07:53 pm
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contriving that coincidence
Revising along, revising along -- and stopping dead. No, these characters are acting illogically, they need to have reason to believe she's who she claims to be.
ponder, ponder, ponder
Oh, yes. I grab a minor character from earlier, who would recognize her, and plop her forward in time. She recognizes the heroine from before.
Still doesn't get a name.
ponder, ponder, ponder
Oh, yes. I grab a minor character from earlier, who would recognize her, and plop her forward in time. She recognizes the heroine from before.
Still doesn't get a name.