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marycatelli) wrote2013-07-28 11:08 pm
marycatelli) wrote2013-07-28 11:08 pm
leaving the field
Thrashing around with the outline, and whether our hero, so loyal to his lord, has to go off and do stuff while some evil sorcery is desecrating his lord's body and exploiting his men for its own purposes. . . and pondering how long he would stay, and then remembering: this guy was on the battlefield where the lord fell.
It's the sort of culture that would expect, "Here lies our lord, cut to pieces, out best man in the dust. If anyone thinks of leaving this battle, he can howl forever," except that our hero has the slight complication that they kicked butt -- the opposing commander fled and has a hard time even getting anyone to follow her after her cowardice -- but just lost their lord. They could have sat on the battlefield forever without anyone coming along to kill them there.
Gotta be an exception clause for that. More or less. Certainly less when someone has it in for him. Given his character, deserting his lord in the grip of dark magic would also have him thinking himself on the less side. After all, failing his lord twice in less than a month would be a real possibility if he ran off and never managed to find him again. Even if staying would be a guarantee of failure.
And then there's our heroine, who is not pledged to any lord. But as soon as I started to think of her contrasting with the hero, she primly told one of the other characters -- I think the lord -- that her father had forbidden her. Is he really expecting her to disobey her father?
It's the sort of culture that would expect, "Here lies our lord, cut to pieces, out best man in the dust. If anyone thinks of leaving this battle, he can howl forever," except that our hero has the slight complication that they kicked butt -- the opposing commander fled and has a hard time even getting anyone to follow her after her cowardice -- but just lost their lord. They could have sat on the battlefield forever without anyone coming along to kill them there.
Gotta be an exception clause for that. More or less. Certainly less when someone has it in for him. Given his character, deserting his lord in the grip of dark magic would also have him thinking himself on the less side. After all, failing his lord twice in less than a month would be a real possibility if he ran off and never managed to find him again. Even if staying would be a guarantee of failure.
And then there's our heroine, who is not pledged to any lord. But as soon as I started to think of her contrasting with the hero, she primly told one of the other characters -- I think the lord -- that her father had forbidden her. Is he really expecting her to disobey her father?
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Everyone will just stand around the battlefield, grieving over the fallen body of the hero/lord *forever*, or at least until you come back and trigger the next part of the story by speaking to the right NPC.
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Considering Tolkien wrote a play about retrieving the corpse, presumably it would have been the right thing to do. Still, it might have raised the question of how the killer got to the lord without your dying first -- in the thick of battle where he was fighting as well as you -- but still. . . .
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I suppose if your lord leads from the front he does occasionally get ahead of you, but I can see how that would be awkward.
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