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marycatelli) wrote2022-11-16 10:49 pm
marycatelli) wrote2022-11-16 10:49 pm
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back and forth
Was coming up to the climax in the outline.
The hero's heroic decision to defend innocents and let others take down the villainess is easily justified -- now -- by having another hero's powers be limited. O frabjous day. . . .
Except that some heroes need more reason to believe she's the villainess. And it would best happen between two incidents. Except that in the outline, I had no significant events happen between them.
sigh
I will also put in an incident after those two. The idiot heroes will demonstrate that they need to learn more prudence and judgment in a situation where their prudence and judgment aren't so essential to others.
Then maybe back to the climax.
The hero's heroic decision to defend innocents and let others take down the villainess is easily justified -- now -- by having another hero's powers be limited. O frabjous day. . . .
Except that some heroes need more reason to believe she's the villainess. And it would best happen between two incidents. Except that in the outline, I had no significant events happen between them.
sigh
I will also put in an incident after those two. The idiot heroes will demonstrate that they need to learn more prudence and judgment in a situation where their prudence and judgment aren't so essential to others.
Then maybe back to the climax.