I haven't read all of these, but your first, before the cut, about the mourning dove, was so arresting and beautiful. And then when I clicked through, the impression of brightly colored birds, different ones in different lines--it was almost like seeing them just to see their names.
And the feathers spread out like fingers--loved that.
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Date: 2019-05-13 04:38 am (UTC)And the feathers spread out like fingers--loved that.