Mary Catelli's Erraticly Updated and Exceedingly Ill-Organized Journal

Rumors are flying. One is that there is a knight errant, wandering about, doing good deeds.

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It's an insult from a knight. At least to a knight. No knight would use it on a wizard, who would be too curious about things and too interested in being able to do many, many, many things to be too insulted by it -- perhaps a little annoyed that you can't do things by spells as powerful as by powerset.

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One important -- and much neglected -- issue in world-building is the generation of the next generation. And in superhero stories, that has to mean whether powers are inheritable.

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There are powers that can break the world. Not so much the world itself -- most supervillains regard the world as a good place to keep their stuff, and those who don't will get all the superheroes and the vast majority of the supervillains to team up against them.

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So if you're strong-willed, and a wizard tries to turn you into a magical knight with a powerset that doesn't really match your character, you end up with magical powers that don't exactly match

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Once it has become possible for someone to spontaneously just become a magical knight, without spell slinging, or a ceremony, or perhaps most vital of all, an oath of allegiance. . . 

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giving way to the new. . .

The way to give this story a happy ending is to change how knights are treated.  Originally they were created for war.  Once certain spells were mastered, they were effective for protection -- more against wandering evildoers than armies, but them, too.

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There's one definitely way you could oppress supers.

Have groups of them, and oppress one.

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Ripping off a story idea and hitting on an issue. It's a nominally feudal land. (Nominally because it's inconsistent.) And the knight has a castle and an estate, both distinctly grand. It's explicitly mentioned that he got them in the original story, but nothing more. Which is one of the flaws that inspired me to redo the idea.

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The princess has to go gallivanting off by herself some time.

So I remember to have her talk about walking and even going into the mountains.

Except that I have her casually mention bringing along a man servant to help at need.  And she has to gallivant alone.

Ah, trade-offs.  There have to be political realities in this world, thus mitigating the fairy tale setting.  She might run away to become a scullery maid, at need, and might even succeed in getting away, but she wouldn't be able to announce that  she was off to seek her fortune.