Mary Catelli's Erraticly Updated and Exceedingly Ill-Organized Journal

There's a noble in the story.  I finally concluded that being called the Master of the Mountains would class him with the nobles.

So I had the heroine remember how her governess fulminated about odd titles and the difficulty of placing them quickly so you can be properly polite.

So, who outranks whom? Wizards or knights? The magical knights, of course. . . .

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Ripping off a story idea and hitting on an issue. It's a nominally feudal land. (Nominally because it's inconsistent.) And the knight has a castle and an estate, both distinctly grand. It's explicitly mentioned that he got them in the original story, but nothing more. Which is one of the flaws that inspired me to redo the idea.

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ah, world-building. There I was, muddling through a world where there is a standing army with officers who aren't noblemen, and a powerful nobility, and then I decided that the heroine queen has to make two new nobles.

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It's very important to read primary source for a world-builder in any fantasy or science fiction story. Not even from the era you are ripping off for a story. Just in depth reading of primary source, in order that you do not accidentally write a mash-up of historical eras.

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So we have a magocracy where the upper classes have the powerful mages. Usually. They work hard at co-opting lower class mages of power, and those born to high rank without great power often marry them to give them the status.
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Shortly before the story begins, the heroine's father became a noble.

I've yet to decide whether he was blindsided by an unexpected inheritance, or by the king's deciding to ennoble him. Blindsided is definite, he does not like the duties of the new role. . . .
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I'm usually as bad at naming cities as any other location -- that is, bad, but one city in particular raises issues.  A magical city.

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hmmm . . . .hmmm. . . now, let's suppose you want to work your Standard Fantasy Setting with more detail.

On one hand, since you are not suffering from disease and famine on every hand, and your peasants are not thin as posts, hollow-eyed and exhausted and ancient at forty, having buried eight of their ten children, you probably have good solid workable magic that produces a good solid prosperity.

On the other hand, kings, queens, princes and princesses, dukes, counts, and other nobles. . . .
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hmmm -- with all those politics swirling about and leading to battle, the question arises of how the nobles can raise forces.

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