for once, fighting

[marycatelli]

Outlining along, told myself that it was a big fight this time and it's not enough to leave the hero and the villainess's powers vague.  I have to establish them.

Turns out I have to do the moves in the fight, too.  Partly because there are other characters that he has to maneuver about; if he didn't care about them, he could just turn tail and run, or else blast everything sight to try to kill her, except in their absence I don't think he would want to kill.

Good thing for him that she wants him prisoner, not dead.