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Revising along, revising along -- and stopping dead. No, these characters are acting illogically, they need to have reason to believe she's who she claims to be.

ponder, ponder, ponder

Oh, yes. I grab a minor character from earlier, who would recognize her, and plop her forward in time.  She recognizes the heroine from before.

Still doesn't get a name.
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