decisions, decisions

sitting down with the outline -- enough with notes, I know the opening scenes, and it won't jell on its own.

So I sit there and realize that I have four characters.  One man is caught outside an area effect because he had to go pick up a delivery outside normal hours -- a combination of wasting time decyphering badly filled out forms, and slacker co-workers -- and one woman and two youngsters are because of a problem with a bus-equivalent, such that they could only cram as many as they could on one bus.

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