The rise of technology -- whether normal human or Gadgeteer/Mad Scientist -- would have a big impact on a super world. Just not the same as in ours. . . .
The difference between just telling events and having cause and effect. The use of flat characters. Fantasy, which just brushes on the edge of the genre as we know it.
Some parts I didn't like -- like his unexplained contempt for pure story. And the writer may find it a bit abstract.
Deep peace of the running wave to you- Deep peace of the flowing air to you- Deep peace of the quiet earth to you- Deep peace of the shining stars to you- Deep peace of the Prince of Peace to you.