Lord, who throughout these forty days

Lord, who throughout these forty days
For us didst fast and pray,
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vignettes

This week's prompt is:
exhausted

Anyone can join, with a 50-word creative fiction vignette in the comments. Your vignette does not have to include the prompt term.

Courting Magic

Courting Magic by Stephanie Burgis

Kat, Incorrigible book 4. Very much a sequel to the trilogy, so spoilers for them ahead.

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so that's the problem

figuring out the weakness of the opening: it's two scenes, and the first is mostly info-dumping.

It should start in the forest, talking about firebirds and golden stags and info-dumping there, because it's not much information, actually.

So all I have to do is dump four pages and rewrite. Which is trivial. I've done much more.

sigh So I'm still bracing myself for it. The writing life.