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Nov. 27th, 2021
in the details, part II
Nov. 27th, 2021 06:39 pmThe first chunk of dialog is done.
The second chunk of dialog -- is revealing how much of the dialog was pure plot device on my part. Not sufficiently motivated on theirs.
Chiefly, the heroine has to have a reason to think of what she suggests that the hero do. (Putting him in more danger than she will be. Unfortunately, she's the one who has to save the day, and it means she will be safer than he is.)
Motives, motives, motives. . . .
The second chunk of dialog -- is revealing how much of the dialog was pure plot device on my part. Not sufficiently motivated on theirs.
Chiefly, the heroine has to have a reason to think of what she suggests that the hero do. (Putting him in more danger than she will be. Unfortunately, she's the one who has to save the day, and it means she will be safer than he is.)
Motives, motives, motives. . . .