times passes
Mar. 21st, 2024 11:01 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
marycatelliSomething's going to happen.
Time is passing between the heroine's escape and the rescue force arriving, but things have to happen in there. Some have to be dealt with in summary, or suggested, because they are time passing in ordinary ways. It feels a little weak, though. I think there shall be a bit more drama. Now I just have to figure out what it is.
Time is passing between the heroine's escape and the rescue force arriving, but things have to happen in there. Some have to be dealt with in summary, or suggested, because they are time passing in ordinary ways. It feels a little weak, though. I think there shall be a bit more drama. Now I just have to figure out what it is.