ah, adventures in stickiness
Oct. 25th, 2024 08:32 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
marycatelliWorking chiefly on two stories. One revising, one writing.
Both bogged down.
One because I realized that I put in things that the point of view character could not have seen, and I was wrestling with how I could fix that most neatly -- since I didn't want to introduce new errors while fixing it.
The other because I realized that I had hand-waved having the hero give a traumatized character a place to rest and recover. He's going to have to set up the place better, and give orders that others are not to intrude.
Ah, the writer's life. I plug on through the mud.
Both bogged down.
One because I realized that I put in things that the point of view character could not have seen, and I was wrestling with how I could fix that most neatly -- since I didn't want to introduce new errors while fixing it.
The other because I realized that I had hand-waved having the hero give a traumatized character a place to rest and recover. He's going to have to set up the place better, and give orders that others are not to intrude.
Ah, the writer's life. I plug on through the mud.