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Plugging along in the story, comes to the point where the heroine joins forces with another wizard.

Wait a minute, why would the other wizard do that? How does she know what she needs to know to motivate her to do that?

That was an interesting piece of dialog. Hmm -- perhaps I need to play up two other characters. I didn't say she knew them, but I could say it.

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