difficulties in dialog
May. 11th, 2026 06:15 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
marycatelliNo, no, don't say that, it's stupid. Because it was logical to shift anything of substance back in story time.
But the characters do have to talk about something. Idle and pointless from their viewpoint, perhaps, but obviously needing to be relevant to the tale. The scene has something else that must remain, but I have to give them something to say.
Not that the characters will tell me what.
But the characters do have to talk about something. Idle and pointless from their viewpoint, perhaps, but obviously needing to be relevant to the tale. The scene has something else that must remain, but I have to give them something to say.
Not that the characters will tell me what.