Feb. 11th, 2023
One More Last Time
Feb. 11th, 2023 11:57 pmOne More Last Time by Eric Ugland
A LitRPG. The narrator is in deep trouble when he gets the offer, chooses a lot randomly, gets his choices fixed up a bit, and lands in a fantasy world.
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A LitRPG. The narrator is in deep trouble when he gets the offer, chooses a lot randomly, gets his choices fixed up a bit, and lands in a fantasy world.
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motive in the moment
Feb. 11th, 2023 11:57 pmThere's some characters who come to help our heroine.
They need a motive.
Perhaps I was spoiled earlier, since she was "helped" by a woman clearly mad and certain that she was helping her victims and was a wonderful person for doing so. But these people with all their flaws, are not mad. They are also, while super, neither heroes nor villains.
And what's most important, the heroine would not just accept their help. The madwoman established that there are those who wish her ill, and she wants to know their motives. Were they heroes, she might just accept it, but she knows they are not.
They need a motive.
Perhaps I was spoiled earlier, since she was "helped" by a woman clearly mad and certain that she was helping her victims and was a wonderful person for doing so. But these people with all their flaws, are not mad. They are also, while super, neither heroes nor villains.
And what's most important, the heroine would not just accept their help. The madwoman established that there are those who wish her ill, and she wants to know their motives. Were they heroes, she might just accept it, but she knows they are not.