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Captain Vorpatril's Alliance by Lois McMaster Bujold

I've been wanting this book a good while.  She can do a nice caper story with Miles, but the thing about character arcs is that they have beginnings, middles, and ends.  Ivan, it seemed to me, had more scope for development.

Ivan Vorpatril's assignment as an aide has brought him to Komarr, and there, Byerly Vorrutyer -- an undercover security guy and dissolute liver -- corners him and asks him to help protect a woman who's connected to a case he's working on.  An attempt to connect to her by mailing something where she works shows that Tej's new to the planet; she doesn't react to the address.  Or to his attempt to pick her up.  He tries again, which results in his being stunned by another woman who was staying with her.  A bright blue woman.

They tie him up in a chair, which is fortunate, because once the crooks they think he is show up, he manages to distract and delay them long enough for the women to wake up and deal with them. 

And that is the point at which it really starts to snowball.  Involving an enormous caper, a secret bunker from the days of the Cetagandian occupation, an agent being debriefed by being whipped off under arrest, a stepfather/stepson relationship, an unpleasant reminder of one of Ivan's least favorite moments. . . .

There was one point -- the scene with Falco -- where I thought Ivan and Tej were being railroaded.  It's one thing to have a plot where you know what's going to happen and want to watch it unfold.  It's another when it seems that the author's hand is forcing them that way.  But that was only one scene.

Date: 2012-12-22 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] persephone-kore.livejournal.com
I agree with you about that scene with Falco. I was thinking when I read it that... it's not that I can't see it, but it wasn't set up well. And I could think of ways to go back and set it up better. It's meant to blindside the characters, yes, and it does -- and I assume it was meant to surprise the readers, but I don't think it played that quite fair.

Date: 2012-12-22 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] persephone-kore.livejournal.com
Hrm. Not quite what I meant? I can see it blindsiding Ivan given... several factors. Habits of thought, assumptions he's making, acting in a tearing hurry. He should have seen it coming but I can buy that he didn't. But he had a certain set of information (goodness, this is hard to do without spoilers) that the reader lacked, or at least, did not get within this book: namely, what was actually said. If she'd included that, my reaction would have been "I should have seen that coming!" (if I didn't) rather than "Well, I wasn't expecting that plot device."

Date: 2012-12-24 06:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] persephone-kore.livejournal.com
And it's something he should have thought about, certainly, and treated seriously. The setup for him failing to do so is there, I think, although it could have been more explicit; but I think the reader should have been given more information.

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