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Fairy tales tend to be a bit short -- on a lot of things, actually -- but particularly on motives. One of them is why they go to war.

Out of story, it's clear. Kings indulge in the final argument of kings so they have to leave their brides and any children alone, which allows the plot to continue by attack of the evil fairy, or the devil, or the wicked mother-in-law. You can't tell your son his wife gave birth to a monster if he can walk down the hall and see the baby. Or they go to war so that the hero can conjure up a suit of armor, some weapons, maybe a band of knights to lead, and save the kingdom, and win the princess's hand in marriage. Etc. Hunting also does the trick, often enough, but war has the advantage of taking long.

In the story? Well, they just go to war. Unless it's because the other king is attacking -- an excellent reason -- but that only pushes it back to that king.

Meanwhile, I've got a story where kings are attacking right, left, and center, and after some observation, I have to come to the conclusion that there needs to be two belligerent kings. However unreasonable his reasons for attacking, the hero's father is going to be a little miffed if his son leads the successful counter-attack. More than he was before. And relenting would look less plausible. sigh

Date: 2015-01-03 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] headnoises.livejournal.com
How about some very profitable land which, if you go by the right of the first-born son, belongs to one kingdom-- and if you go by the right of the widowed mother (who he abandoned to marry the lady on one side of the Very Important Shipping River), who willed it to her daughter, who married the neighbor on the other side?

Disagreement about who very yummy land belongs to is traditional, after all, along with shipping routes and mines.

Bad finances on one part and rich land nearby is another reason.

Too many sons and thus a need to get land for them is another.

Oooh, and if you need a traditionally nasty neighbor, have them pick their king among the leader's many sons by who has the loyalty of the military, which would mean they're ALL military and ALL want to have really awesome victories with lots of loot.

Date: 2015-01-03 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] headnoises.livejournal.com
Ooh, and you could do that with stuff about cadet lines and destroyed records, and falsified church documents... your character for this one is the scribe, right? It gives a reason for the exposition.

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