Mary Catelli's Erraticly Updated and Exceedingly Ill-Organized Journal

Superhero fights can't be so dramatic on the written page as in the comics.

Still, I think mine need some work.  A baseline of energy attacks and some kind of defense lacks the magical touch.   Especially when I specify that every single knight has a unique prowess, however much they can be classified.  

Colors are only a start.  But they are a start.  

Once a writer was skipping along in her work, describing a bear as cinnamon colored. . .

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The heroine sails up to the port.

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The hero gets his first look at the heroine -- as red as blood, as white as snow, as black as a raven -- and I'm thinking, what color are her eyes?

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When writing description in a story, always remember the point of view.

And when NOT writing description in a story, always remember the point of view.

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My characters are not in my confidence.

A wise thing to remember. Especially when I had actually put in one character's mouth a fair innocuous explanation for their problem. The other character has to persuade him to assume they are in mortal danger, even with all the potential for accidents.

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I suspect that it refers to that friend of our childhood, the prince of the old folk tale; the young man who travels for seven miles and comes to seven gates guarded by seven dragons, and passes through all sorts of perils, which are marked at once by moral heroism and mathematical symmetry. It is he who is to be exhibited in as a despot and oppressor; as a despot of elfland and an oppressor of seven-headed dragons. As he is rather a remote as well as a romantic figure, it may be a little difficult for historians to discover what were his true colours. His true colours, so far as I am concerned, are silver and gold and crimson, and all the colours of the rainbow.

G. K. Chesterton

Mud, Mary, mud.  remember the mud.

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Ah, the linear nature of prose.

An illustrator, or an animator, has to deal with the time spent filling up the page with all the figures of the crowd.  A movie director needs to worry about the budget, with all those extras.
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